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Hi all,
Posting yet another of my poem, completed sometime back..Honestly this poem was written by me when i had a small fight with my lovely sister..  .never knew the aftermath could be so eye-opening in form of good words..
would request you all to freely drop in your valuable comments, criticisms.. here it goes TRAPPED Trapped lies the little lonesome heart Inside the cold crusty bosom, waiting to be released And fly to heaven, fly to Shores beautiful; break free from The veins of sickening solitude, Strengthening their claw like hold onto it. Trapped lie the thoughts at the back of the mind. Thoughts clear, sincere, purer. And trapped lies the spirit, the soul Or whatever-else-the-life-source-is-called Inside the curves of the warm body. Trapped are the fountains of tears Inside these eyes like the desert. And trapped seems somewhere the holy wine Inside the twin chalices of my breasts. Trapped lies the elusive smile behind The visible curve of the dry lips. And trapped lie the magical wondrous words In my mouth; in the tongue. Trapped lies the balmy warmth inside my hands. Trapped lies the will to pace on To dance, to flow, inside my feet. O now! Set the trap free and Let the untrapped- magic of love flow. |
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aah touching!! I like..  |
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hii
thanks a lot for the reply....and the lines you find touching cheers Shilpi |
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Really good. Hats off to u. Hope u have a fight with ur sister whenever u write such poems. Awesome |
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